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TeddyKGB

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #120 on: April 19, 2008, 06:04:38 pm »
Not untill you close your eyes, I will close mine
You drink blood, I drink wine
Just like the moonlight, it won't shine

Realism is long far gone. I take pills for joy and you look like Sigmund Freud.
I wrote a book about being smart and you said that this is art.

Not untill I live in space, I will say hi.
You like rock I play pop
Love will. Tear us apart

Realism is long far gone.
I take pills for joy and you look like Sigmund Freud.
I wrote a book about being smart and you said that this is art.
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Spoon

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #121 on: April 20, 2008, 01:22:50 am »
Sharp as a needle
Words cut deep
Sense swirls and congeals
I don't know what you're talking about
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TeddyKGB

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #122 on: April 20, 2008, 10:20:16 am »
I'm walking down the road to nowhere
I'm looking for a place for me to get lost
I'm leaving all my things behind me.
I let them die slowly in the frost.
Couse of this I will never meet my father or my sister.
Nor my mother, my brother or any other sucker.
I said goodbye to them when they were sleeping.
It's the last and only goodbye I'll ever give them.

I Know, yes I know, I will die alone.
I know...thats the only way for me to sit on my throne.
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/--[Geti

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #123 on: April 21, 2008, 05:20:39 am »
ill put old stuff first. note the gradient of emotion (im much happier now)

devoured..,

we stand here
beside one another and
we feel..
like we might-as-well
walk away..

tripping over one another now
and theres nothing-left-to-say

at.
all.

so we turn out heads
and walk our ways
apart to be devoured by
the lives we once walked
lies we once thought.
and we fall back on
what we know
and we choke because
we find out were lost.
or
at
least..
I AM

-------------

i need to learn to laugh
at something other than the chaos im falling into
i need to learn to see
more than the darkness im breathing
i need to learn to smile
outwardly so people know when im happy
i need to learn to lie
so people DONT KNOW WHEN IM NOT

i need to learn to hope
that things will get better
i need to learn to skip
because i still dont know how
i need to learn to chase
and lose myself in love
i need to learn to run
so i can find a way OUT

i need to learn to fly
so i can escape the hypocracy
i need to learn to fall
so i can find my way down
i need to learn to land
so i can come back to haunt you
i need to learn to CRASH
SO I DONT BURN WHEN IM FOUND OUT

i need to learn to choke
on words that flow like water
i need to learn to bite
my cutting painful shouts
i need to learn to swim
up rivers of your untruths
i need to learn to drown
so i never see you pout

i need to learn to hate
so i can live without you
i need to learn to scorn
so i can express all ive found
i need to learn to like
so i can live alongside and
i need to learn to love
so i can die without a sound

-------------
a song

48 minutes (Happily ever After)
/------[South of Heaven]------------------------------------/
key:
[sc] - screamed
[q] - quietly
[o] - overlayed with screaming
_w_ - where w is tag applied

-------------------------------------------------------------
Undecided
Unrelenting Anguish
Hear your Voice
Once Last Time
And Realisations win.      [q]

Hasnt been our time
Just called me from the Shadows
Push me back
Let him in
But _Please_          [o]
save some more for _later_    [sc]

Shivering.. on a sunny afternoon
Shivering and Hoping
youll come back soon
But if you never do
My death will go on
forever
and ever
so you can be
Happily ever After      [sc]

You know i miss you
Even told me not to
but you know
i just cant
Be That Icy.         [q]

Lost and found
Find me in the darkness
Dont Lose Me         [sc]
I couldn't         [sc]
GO BACK THERE AGAIN      [sc]

so come back for me..      [q]
please save me..      [q]

Dont let it go to waste      [o]
look what im fighting for
It's
You....

Shivering..
after all weve been through
Shivering and Hoping i can
Relinquish you         [sc]
If not my love will live
forever
and ever
so you can be         [sc]
Happily ever after

//--[solo here.. slowly]---------//

Can You Live?      Well ofcourse
         And Maybe
Would you Avoid me?   Never
         Unless hes anywhere nearby
It isnt our time yet   I know

I know And
Thats What Hurts the Most   [sc]

Shivering. on a sunny afternoon.
Shivering and hoping
youll come back soon
At Least if you dont
at least if you never
I can Still My Choking heart   [sc]
And Be....

Happily Ever After...      [q]

                        <3

--------

Maybe im ****ing dying
maybe i ****ing hate you
youre hurt, or you were
did you know how much you meant?
we had something beautiful
but **** all that were lost now arent we?

Were lost in a world of confusion
and pressure and sometimes pain
could we find the way out
blind leading he blind, stumbling in the rain
laughing at the chaos
living in the dark
we summoned
in our protection.

choking on my own blood i never thought
i never wanted anything like this
i thought we were happy
but now i dont know if i could
say you ever were
i was, and therefore i couldnt believe in
my dark side

or maybe i could
maybe i was wrong all along
IN FACT I THINK THATS PROBABLY RIGHT NOW
LOOKING BACK
i see
that maybe it was all just a stupid
crush

just a slip of the finger
a slip of the tongue
on both of our parts then
yes thats it.
it was just a ****ing mistake.
ISNT THAT A ****ING CHEERY THOUGHT?

yep we had something
but it was never true
because you never wanted
it to be permanent
always middle ground. JUST LIKE YOU SAID YOU WERE SCARED OF
and looking back at some of the things we talked about
i should have probably seen the lies
in your eyes
and your heart
and your head
were lost. forever.
goodbye now.
were dead.

----------------

maybe
if people cared
i could be alone again
wheres the answers
wheres my hope
wheres the chain around my throat

why cant i understand
all the fires
burning on my hand
hope you know what youre doing
cause im just lost
and youre just moving along

still maybe i could find somewhere...
maybe i could hide lick my wounds then reappear
or maybe
I SHOULD CUT YOU OUT
ALL-TO-GET-HER
everyone knows what you want but me.

but its okay.
ill live
really
and it doesnt actually pain me..
its funny
maybe you taught me well
never forget
i feel like ive fallen through hell..

and im okay. never better in this position.
JUST CAUSE ITS THE SECOND TIME IVE REALLY BEEN HERE
maybe im stronger than i thought
or maybe
maybe i just dont know what ive lost.,,......

------------

big change now - moved on from her, were still friends. (funnily enough)
onto my current lover (she is the best ever. fullstop.)

------------

The Sun'll come out.
And we'll go skipping
I dont know how to..
but i could learn..
If you could teach me
How to go skipping
I'd go skipping with you.
   till the day i die...

tripping over
always to the left side

running with a jump in your step.
i know ill get it one time

The Sun'll come out.
And we'll go skipping
I dont know how to..
but i could learn..
If you could teach me
How to go skipping
I'd go skipping with you.
   forever...

----------------

Stemmed from the lives we knew, we couldbe done better, and we did...
locked into eachother, i feel completed-
   never known better than this...

Felt that we should go past friendship and denial and kiss...
wrapped up in your arms, i feel completed-
   never known better than this~

Hold me Trust me Kiss me Love me
   never known better than this...

Lick me Hug me Stroke me Love me
   I felt alone
   untill we kissed...

Please
   Dont
      Fade

Ever~

Please
   Just
      Wait
Ill be there soon i promise you~

Infatuated, learning how much i had missed...
Open the door to me, i feel completed-
   never known better than this...

Smiling in the sunshine, thinking of learning to skip...
drown in compassion, i feel completed-
   never known better than this~

Hold me Trust me Kiss me Love me
   never known better than this...

Lick me Hug me Stroke me Love me
   I felt alone
   untill we kissed...

Please
   Dont
      Fade

Ever~

Please
   Just
      Wait
Ill be there soon i promise you~

please dont worry ill never forget you
because youre my best friend in the world.
you bring light into my life, and warmth to my heart
youre an incredible girl, and i love you~

Please
   Dont
      Fade

Ever~

Please
   Just
      Wait
Ill be there soon i promise you, [namecensored].

--------------------

ill put more up if you want.. i have a lot more about my current lover, but idk..

should i have censored some of this?
most of the first ones are just raw emotion.

ill put better worded stuff on if anyone asks me to.

sorry for the huge post btw :P

[Edit by Purplehaze] Fixed your post because you used the [s[size=1pt]
] (strike though) which causes all the text after to have a line through it. Nice stuff btw =][/size]
« Last Edit: April 22, 2008, 12:40:43 am by Purplehaze »
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Shade

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #124 on: June 04, 2008, 06:41:17 am »
Holy crap :o
Your good.
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One day you'll just be a memory for some people, do your best to be a good one.

/--[Geti

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #125 on: February 07, 2009, 03:29:50 pm »
this needs some revival. seriously, the art forums dont move in this place :P
thanks for the comments from purplehaze and shade, heres something i whipped up, its 03:28 AM here, so i though of the title from my state of mind.

-------------[SleepyShip]--------------------------------------------------------------- -  -

its good to be back but its killing me to leave
its like i cant be peaceful unless im close to you.

i know we can do it, and i know were both so strong
its just to me being seperate seems so wrong, but i
   i know that i love you
   and i believe
its like i cant be still until im close to you.

insofar weve found our sleepyship
running in the sweat tears and blood
   on our fingertips
flowing from the other
tides of love carry me

   to you.

its like i never set foot on the ground there
and now im back and its all moving quickly
its like i wont believe anything unless im close to you.

i'm not sure just how much i believe in myself
anymore because we're so powerful but seperate
   I feel weak
   but i believe
its like i cant be still until im close to you.

still im
clinging, onto my sleepyship
whispering of love and forever
   if i think of it
clinging to my -soulmate-
tides of love carry me

   home.

oh, thanks to haze for the quick edit too, i forgot about the strikethrough tags. night all.

Gaston

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #126 on: May 02, 2009, 01:58:07 am »
I was trying to write a short story, based on a sentance that got stuck in my head, but it ended up as a poem. Feedback is much appreciated!

I Am Not There

I am not there. She knows. I know. Noone else knows. I used to be there though.. Things were different back then. They're even more different now. I watch her from above. I try to guard her, but something stops me. I can't retaliate against the buried restrictions. Thus, I am forced to watch over her with nothing to do, in a place where I high to cater so much for her. This is what I see:

Alone in  a room. Darkness embraces the light of her hope. Torn up dress, shivers, tears running from hollow eyes.  Walls creep closer, creating a saturation of claustrophobia. Curled up in the corner.  Alone in the room.

Why do I force myself to witness this self-mutilation of beauty? Nothingness squanders my body till nothing is left bar the hollow shell to keep up the meaningless facade. If I wish to keep any part of myself alive, turning away is the only way. I keep observing:

A table. Four wooden legs ready to burst at the smallest shiver. On top, a cylindrical container, tracing beyond the cylinder, a long steel tip. Candlelight burning, liquifying the molecylar structure on the metal plate. Hope is now beyond redemption.

Hopelessness is the thin red thread running through the scene playing out before my senses. I feel numb. My body is alive, but my mind is dead. I feel trapped in a state of Limbo. My skin feels smooth and dry. It's all covered in blood.

Climax. Everything is ready. The table did not burst. Everything went according to plan. The cylinder of death is filled with a structure designed for the lowest state of mind. The tip touches the skin. It penetrates. Mixing itself with the biological marvels which are too sensitive to cope. Her mind says that nothing and everything is ok. A lifeless body on the pit of the floor. I am not there.
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Belle: woah, is that a neatly snuck in sexproposition? Could I ask you to take of your pants?

Gothica

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #127 on: August 09, 2009, 08:41:48 pm »
i liked that free webs poem u there points to that  ;D 8) :D
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RussG

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #128 on: August 09, 2009, 09:37:26 pm »
Hangover from Hell

It's crawling, it's coming, it's there
                                                     holy hell why me?
Never again, never said it before, never did that really.
                   WHEN DO THEY TAKE ME AWAY INSTEAD OF

pushing my buttons
 without
   a
    slightest
      PITY
and it happens all over again next weekend
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Pera

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #129 on: September 15, 2009, 01:28:40 pm »
NO cash = NO ha$h
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Totalbitch

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #130 on: February 14, 2010, 08:02:21 am »
Sup all ya'll it has been awhile since I was on this site.
But I'm here with my style and havent slept all night.
Still drunk still smelling the blunt
tired of **** so I'll be checking the trunk.
I'm not saying that I'm big pimpin'
Broke both of my legs last summer so be gangsta limpin'
Shout outs for all Oldschool Players
and the LX creators. [AoG] aka the next door neightbours.
**** the haters! This is for the prayers who see the world changing.


Raise your bottle and drink for PEACE!!!
Love shall set you free...
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Spade allmighty!
aka. tha baby butcher!
alias -=Ronin=-!
One of the true RIP's!
The one and only GOD of WaN!
Forever staying in history as Osp!
Still going strong in [AoG]!

Midnight

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #131 on: February 14, 2010, 03:39:55 pm »
My old english teacher ttold me that everytime :)

He was someone really special  :)

Life is mostly froth and bubble,
Two things stand like stone,
Kindness in another's trouble,
Courage in your own.
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Emma Watson <333

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IRC

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #132 on: February 14, 2010, 04:30:22 pm »
****. **** this shit.
**** givin it to me.

If I only could I'd set the world on fire
If I only could I'd set the world on fire
If I only could I'd set the world on fire
Sya **** the world! (**** the world!)
If I only could I'd set the world on fire
**** em all! (**** em all!)

**** you, **** me, **** us
**** Tom, **** Mary, **** Gus
**** Darius
**** the west coast, and **** everybody on the east
Eat shit and die, or **** off at least
**** pre-schoolers, **** rulers
Kings and Queens and gold jewelers
**** wine coolers
**** chickens, **** ducks
Everybody in your crew sucks, punk mother ****s
**** critics, **** your review
Even if you like me, **** you
**** your mom, **** your mom's momma
**** the Beastie Boys and the Dali Llama
**** the rain forest, **** a Forrest Gump
You probably like it in the rump
**** a shoe pump, **** the real deal and **** all the fakes
**** all fifty two states! Oooo, and **** you

**** Oprah, **** opera, **** a soap opera
**** a pop locker and a **** blocker
**** your girlfriend, I probably did her already
**** Kyle and his brother Tom Petty, Jump Steady
My homie, **** him, what are you gonna do?
(**** that *****, **** you!) Yeah well **** you too
Don't bother tryin to analyze these rhymes
In this song I say **** ninety three times
**** the president, **** your welfare
**** your government and **** Fred Bear
**** Nugent, like anybody gives a ****
You like to hunt a lot, so ****in what?!
**** disco, Count of Monte Crisco
**** Cisco, and Jack and Jerry Brisco
And **** everyone who went down with the Titanic, in a panic
I'm like **** you, AHHHHH!!!!

**** Celine Dion and **** Dionne Warwick
You both make me sick, suck my dick
**** the Berlin Wall, both sides of it
And **** Lyle Lovett, whoever the **** that is
**** everybody in the hemisphere
**** them across the world, and **** them right here
You know the guy that operates the Rouge River draw bridge in Delray on
Jefferson? **** HIM!
**** your idea, **** your gonnoreha
**** your diarrhea, Rocky Maivia
**** your wife, your homie did, he's ****in you
**** the police and the 5-0 too
**** Spin, Rolling Stone, and **** Vibe
**** everybody inside
Whoever's on the cover, **** his mother
**** your little brother's homie from around the way
And **** Violent J!
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Code

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #133 on: February 14, 2010, 04:40:43 pm »
beautiful! :)
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Michiel

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #134 on: February 14, 2010, 10:00:29 pm »
songtexts? i thought it was poetry
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Raziel

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #135 on: February 14, 2010, 10:43:01 pm »
****. **** this shit.
**** givin it to me.

If I only could I'd set the world on fire
If I only could I'd set the world on fire
If I only could I'd set the world on fire
Sya **** the world! (**** the world!)
If I only could I'd set the world on fire
**** em all! (**** em all!)

**** you, **** me, **** us
**** Tom, **** Mary, **** Gus
**** Darius
**** the west coast, and **** everybody on the east
Eat shit and die, or **** off at least
**** pre-schoolers, **** rulers
Kings and Queens and gold jewelers
**** wine coolers
**** chickens, **** ducks
Everybody in your crew sucks, punk mother ****s
**** critics, **** your review
Even if you like me, **** you
**** your mom, **** your mom's momma
**** the Beastie Boys and the Dali Llama
**** the rain forest, **** a Forrest Gump
You probably like it in the rump
**** a shoe pump, **** the real deal and **** all the fakes
**** all fifty two states! Oooo, and **** you

**** Oprah, **** opera, **** a soap opera
**** a pop locker and a **** blocker
**** your girlfriend, I probably did her already
**** Kyle and his brother Tom Petty, Jump Steady
My homie, **** him, what are you gonna do?
(**** that *****, **** you!) Yeah well **** you too
Don't bother tryin to analyze these rhymes
In this song I say **** ninety three times
**** the president, **** your welfare
**** your government and **** Fred Bear
**** Nugent, like anybody gives a ****
You like to hunt a lot, so ****in what?!
**** disco, Count of Monte Crisco
**** Cisco, and Jack and Jerry Brisco
And **** everyone who went down with the Titanic, in a panic
I'm like **** you, AHHHHH!!!!

**** Celine Dion and **** Dionne Warwick
You both make me sick, suck my dick
**** the Berlin Wall, both sides of it
And **** Lyle Lovett, whoever the **** that is
**** everybody in the hemisphere
**** them across the world, and **** them right here
You know the guy that operates the Rouge River draw bridge in Delray on
Jefferson? **** HIM!
**** your idea, **** your gonnoreha
**** your diarrhea, Rocky Maivia
**** your wife, your homie did, he's ****in you
**** the police and the 5-0 too
**** Spin, Rolling Stone, and **** Vibe
**** everybody inside
Whoever's on the cover, **** his mother
**** your little brother's homie from around the way
And **** Violent J!


Awwww... you didn't get any Valentine card? I know how ya feel bro. I didn't get any either. But, look at the bright side of life - you didn't have balls to send a card to any pretty friend either :)))
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WeirdApples

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #136 on: May 10, 2010, 10:01:40 pm »
Im getting owned very fast by p00.
No cannon, no doomsday, only me and my napalm.
I threw my rope, threw my napalm
after second, no more p00, no more weapons
rope saves me from Middys' furious handgun.

There, under my middlefinger, on the Z key
Rope of life
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Tafka

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #137 on: May 10, 2010, 10:13:00 pm »
Last night I saw a lady
She sang like a bird
I went crazy
from the moment I heard

My lady sing for me

Nets

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #138 on: May 11, 2010, 12:44:29 am »
I baked a cake
The cake was great
After that i had a shake
It tasted better than the cake
Then i smiled
that this poem rhymed
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TeddyKGB

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #139 on: August 21, 2010, 10:58:40 pm »
Soft kisses with an evil touch
I did not feel a thing because she gave to much
I am not the guy that she thought I was

Some days I just feel so down
Do not even care who will come around
Trying to make my day seem brighter and my soul more young

And when I die I don't want any single rose
I just want to lay down without any noise
You are welcome to come and shed a tear for me

Some days it's only you I see and some days you are as good as dead to me
But hey, I can't help it cause' I am who I am.

They call me the Divided Man
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