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Krayonaise

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #100 on: February 09, 2008, 04:33:15 pm »
Dang Haze, thats some good stuff.
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Purplehaze

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #101 on: February 09, 2008, 06:08:52 pm »
She drinks poison with a smile

Awesome line right there.

Dang Haze, thats some good stuff.
Thanks. =]
You should post your pillow poem here if you didn't. I <3 that one.
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Me

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #102 on: February 18, 2008, 04:11:38 am »
Lyrics

 
You shouldn't throw stones if ya live in a glass house,
and if u got a glass jaw u should watch your mouth,
cuz i break yo face,
have your ass runnin mummblin to tha chase,
Your going gaisnt me dawg yo makin a mistake,
ill split you ass lookin like that michael jackson jacket with all them zipper,


THATS ALL FOLKS

Spoon

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #103 on: February 18, 2008, 04:39:31 am »
Aww. I thought you were going somewhere near Radiohead's beautiful 'Life in a Glass House'. But no. Some 'yo-punk-ass-*****-mother****er-i-break-yo-teeth-so-you-got-to-wear-oversized-bling-bling-bracers, how-dat-feel-home-dawg?' type thing instead.. ;(

http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/6235/bossflames3yh7.png

Anyway, as it's one of my favourite songs, vaguely related to the current drift of the thread:

Once again, I'm in trouble with my only friend
She is papering the window panes
She is putting on a smile
Living in a glass house

Once again, packed like frozen food and battery hens
Think of all the starving millions
Don't talk politics and don't throw stones
Your royal highnesses

Well of course I'd like to sit around and chat
Well of course I'd like to stay and chew the fat
Well of course I'd like to sit around and chat
But someone's listening in.

Once again, we are hungry for a lynching
That's a strange mistake to make
You should turn the other cheek
Living in a glass house

Well of course I'd like to sit around and chat
Well of course I'd like to stay and chew the fat
Well of course I'd like to sit around and chat
But someone's listening in
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Oxygen

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #104 on: February 18, 2008, 04:45:40 am »
Thom is sex. Radiohead gives my ears an orgasm. Let's all hate on Desmond for not liking them. I would die without Radiohead....
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Me

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #105 on: February 18, 2008, 04:54:13 am »
Lyrics;

Now in the bible it says,
thou shal not have 2 husbends in bed,
have homosexual sex,
unless of course givin the consent to join in,
which is of course in the course of bisexual sex,
which isnt as bad,
as long as u show some remorse for ur actions,
either before during or after,
preforming the act of that which,
is more commenly refered to as such phrases,
more used by todays kids,
in such derogetory ways,
but whos to say wuts fair to say and wut not to say ,
lets ask Pamela A.,
Pamela A. i have a question if i may?
(Yea?) is it straight ,
to play puttputt golf with a friend(yea)
and watch his butt butt when he tees off(yea)
but but i aint dun yet,
in football the quarterback yells out hut hut as he reachs into another grown mans ass,
grabs on his butt but just wut if it was never meant it was just an accident,
but he slipped and his penis went in,
in his teeny tiny little round hiney, and his penis twitched just a little bit,
but wut iff he pictures it as a females but?
is that straight?
i jus tneed alcear things up ,
until the ill just walk around with a manly strut

Oxygen

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #106 on: February 18, 2008, 08:48:20 am »
Well seeing as some random mod/Admin (Most probbably Alex) deemed my last post deleatable I shall be forced to flame what a piece of crap that was am I'm suprised they did'nt deleate that instead of my post. Im also suprised at how this is "Deemed" a "serious topic" with the amount of crap that's put into it. E.G. "Me"'s post above mine.

Please never post something like that ever again, I for one know several people who could find that offensive, devout Christians (Vidar) for one, Foot ballers, Golfers and not to mention the large homosecksual community of LXA. Happy now?
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Purplehaze

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #107 on: February 18, 2008, 09:34:11 am »
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FV5oMt4T9uA

2:00-3:16

Not exactly, but you got most of the lyrics right.
Let's try to keep it to lyrics and poems that you have created from now on, though.

As a Christian, football player, and homosexual, I don't find it offensive.
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Me

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #108 on: February 18, 2008, 10:13:22 pm »
lol damit u figured it out

Krayonaise

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #109 on: February 20, 2008, 12:40:09 am »
my stuff is too newb and long for this place. haha get it? the asian has something too long for once.
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Purplehaze

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #110 on: February 20, 2008, 01:12:04 am »
Shut up Kray.
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Krayonaise

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #111 on: February 20, 2008, 02:19:42 am »
Hahahahahahaha. I needed that.
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Me

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #112 on: February 20, 2008, 02:45:26 am »
Russian Lyrics For my russian homos i mean homies out ther

Mayee Yatza Jaretza na skavarotkeieie,

Nuuuuuu anii ne gatoveyeieieieiie,

Kakje mne byit,

Kada nejatova mya yeddaaaaaaaa!,

Thats verse one but its streched out with about ten solos in between each line because russian songs are nice like that

Me

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #113 on: February 20, 2008, 02:50:17 am »
draw a penis

Krayonaise

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #114 on: February 20, 2008, 03:24:06 am »
Hahahahahahaha. I needed that.

I don't get it, does anyone else? What did Kray mean with that. What did I hope to get out of making him write that. Did I expect such reaction? And what will I do now once I have attained it?

was actually talking to haze. but sure, if u want the attention, we can pretend for u, my special man.
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Purplehaze

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #115 on: February 20, 2008, 10:35:19 pm »
I'll just ban you now then?
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Me

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #116 on: February 20, 2008, 11:18:40 pm »
pwnt

Oxygen

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #117 on: February 21, 2008, 06:40:08 am »
I wrote some poetry just to get this topic back on the rails so don't hate if it's not too great.

All that talking you do
Whats it about and who?
You can just keep whispering
And I'll keep on screaming
Have I been cut out of the picture
It breaks my heart with tiny fractures
Breaking like cracks in a damn
To think this post post could have been spam.


Sure, the last line kinda ruins it, but too bad!
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Some Random Ock

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #118 on: February 27, 2008, 07:22:45 pm »
Poetry thread huh?
Here's a poem for you.

"I dont want to share my enlightment or try to explain what feelings or moments that have led me to grow as a being of this time and earth. I do not wish to belittle my poetry even more by wraping it around in nicely tidy rhyming package for the 'masses'. Poetry represent who I am. I do not wish to belittle myself. Do you? You just observe the outer shell of my inner depiction, what commerialism, ptwii! Poems? I consider them being great insult to invidualism. It's the enlighted version of emo. If you wish to affect one ut of hundred, then its bad business. Life is about business. Don't go bancrupt on purpose.

You won't get mine.
I won't get yours.
So whats the point?"



I found that extremely offensive. That's all fine and dandy if you think that a rhyme scheme isnt necessary, and really it isnt, but looking down your nose on anyone else is an extremely undesireable trait.

Maybe those are your true opinions, but I hope you arent serious.

If this poem is you truly expressing yourself, have fun being you. I just dont like how you're basically saying "you all suck, you're selling out, you dont understand me, you're losers, I see the bigger picture and you dont." Personally, I think you "know the words but dont know the music," or, you think you have it but you're still wrong.

writing poetry for me, I guess, defines me in some way, but it's mainly for introspective reevaluation. Also, I write poems as a form of entertainment.


Ever heard of a Limerick, Brat?





ANYWAYS. Here are some poems I wrote without a rhyme scheme.




My Heart

my actions reflect
the dissimilarities
of my creation

multifacetted
human moods will contradict
polar opposites

half of my body
moreso the left half of it
is in good spirits

half of my mindset
ever so contradicting
is always adverse

one half in order
the other in diseray
hanging in balance

my only answer
is my heart is on one side
and never on two





fingertip

twiddle your digits
fingers play and fingers dance
hands have no limits

concentric circles
or at least nearly perfect
like lines in the sand

nothing quite like it
so intricate and unique
so frozen in time

how symmetrical
even the flaws are perfect
to trick my eyes so

cast away the rings
you never needed any
your hand has enough

everyone has them
yet they're never quite the same
we all have patterns

like the way we think
or how we blink our eyelids
nothing is the same

asymmetrical
yet the simlarities
never stop calling

how long must you stare
into the palm of your hand
before you get it

I descend into
canyons of my fingerprint
discover my flaws



clay

of earth and water
i command thee to take form
become beautiful

like the butterfly
mysterious final form
beauty is concealed

for my eyes alone
to be put upon a shelf
nothing fanciful

on this shelf is dust
destruction of the utmost
i cannot bear it

this dirt and water
forced into an existence
a slave no longer


and here's a recent one with a rhyme scheme.

It's about nostalgia and how things will never be the same as you remembered them. they will never be quite as good.



Summer

and with that hot air
the summer did go
with lore of sagacious heat

lo and behold
the attumn leaves blow
soon we put shoes on our feet

those bouyant nights
we have outgrown
but we never truly forgot

so true to life
you can never go home
but surely think of it a lot
« Last Edit: February 27, 2008, 07:31:42 pm by Some Random Ock »
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Asrack

Re: Poetry thread~~~>
« Reply #119 on: March 11, 2008, 03:24:53 am »
I just kinda wrote it. It's pretty emo.

Glaring stares as I walk down the hall
my eyes roll into my head
as if my stomach exploded from the force
 a fist full of hate
a thousand laughs
tears roll down my face
as I run home to be left alone.

While I hold this bottle to my face
I fall deeper and deeper into a none-permanent phase
that pushes me away from reality and the world
until the next day where I hide away
ever longing for someone to be near
depressed and lost


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