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Cizzle's Music
« on: February 01, 2010, 11:10:25 pm »
http://soundcloud.com/bestproducerever/my-perspective
http://soundcloud.com/cizdnb/ciz-ascaris <- proper one, last account was made too randomly.
Let's see if anybody likes Liquid Drum and bass
it's done by myself of course.
« Last Edit: February 08, 2010, 03:58:28 pm by Cizin »
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Re: Cizzle's Music
« Reply #1 on: February 02, 2010, 04:09:06 am »
Hey Ciz,

A more than decent try I must say. Here is what I think.
It starts well with a chill melody. Something easy (C minor chord if I'm correct made with a great sample, or did you use layers?) with a nice background. Then your buildup at 0:45 was great. (Would love to know which effect you used if you were using the Loops to create this piece of art, or how you did it anyway)
Then, as expected, the drum 'n bass percussions start at 0:47 with the background still filling it up nicely. So far, great!
But then at 1:08, if I were you, I would add a small buildup again before your C-minor chord melody kicks in again and as soon as the melody's back, I would also add something new, some variation. More or less like this:

(C - C - G - Eb - C) - some high notes - (C - C -G - Eb - C)

The pause at 1:30 comes a bit early in my opinion. I would postpone it a bit and let your melody play for 2 more measures, with more variation then ofcourse like I said above, before you take the rest.

Overall it seems to be a pretty good song, especially if this was one of your first tries. You seem to understand how the tracks are built up and you've already chosen some great samples, which is important, as they can either make or break a song.

Drum 'n Bass is as I've already told you not really my genre, but I appreciate it once in a while and this track could become one of those I would listen more to.

Congrats with this attempt. 60% finished I see now. :) Go for it!
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Re: Cizzle's Music
« Reply #2 on: February 02, 2010, 01:53:17 pm »
HORRIBLE SHIT OMGOMGOMG!
U SUCK MAN..
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Re: Cizzle's Music
« Reply #3 on: February 02, 2010, 03:01:35 pm »
Yep, thanks for the big ups and some ideas Raf, let's see how it turns out once i finish it and start mastering it.
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Re: Cizzle's Music
« Reply #4 on: February 02, 2010, 03:57:54 pm »
Maybe you use the same beat to much. But anyways it's good:) Try to change the rythm a bit. A bit to long melody that goes the same, even if you build up it's the same but with more sounds.
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Re: Cizzle's Music
« Reply #5 on: February 02, 2010, 03:59:08 pm »
Maybe you use the same beat to much. But anyways it's good:) Try to change the rythm a bit. A bit to long melody that goes the same, even if you build up it's the same but with more sounds.
u sound like expert!!  :D  :D   :D  :D  :D
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Re: Cizzle's Music
« Reply #6 on: February 02, 2010, 04:42:40 pm »
Maybe you use the same beat to much. But anyways it's good:) Try to change the rythm a bit. A bit to long melody that goes the same, even if you build up it's the same but with more sounds.
u sound like expert!!  :D  :D   :D  :D  :D
and you sound like a little child.

Nice work ciz :) i like the chords in the background, and the drum is ok too.
 The melody in the intro is cool, i'd change the drums there though (straight drumhits).
and like Raf said:  your buildup at 0:45 is great.
but then at 1:10 -1:31 its a kinda boring melody. you could maybe vary the high C-C-G-D#-C  C-C C-C melody to C-C-G-D#-Bb C-C C-Bb or smth.
then again at 1:54.. keep the melody in the first tacts and change after some seconds..
but this is only my opinion :D i don't use to listen to techno so.. :P
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Re: Cizzle's Music
« Reply #7 on: February 02, 2010, 06:07:32 pm »
Yep i'm still testing and tweaking a lot, and fixing all the shit i put in it, anyway , thanks for the thumbs up ;) Oh and code, this isn't techno, it's Drum and bass :P
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Re: Cizzle's Music
« Reply #8 on: February 02, 2010, 07:15:43 pm »
Oh and code, this isn't techno, it's Drum and bass :P
bah :D
all those midi songs are sounding like techno for me ^^
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Re: Cizzle's Music
« Reply #9 on: February 03, 2010, 10:56:18 am »
Nice track, except that high piano notes in the end which seems bit out of place for me.
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Re: Cizzle's Music
« Reply #10 on: February 03, 2010, 04:17:06 pm »
Yes they are, i'll get on it soon enough
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Re: Cizzle's Music
« Reply #11 on: February 03, 2010, 04:18:15 pm »
i like classic music
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Re: Cizzle's Music
« Reply #12 on: February 06, 2010, 07:44:50 pm »
To me, the melody sounds a little too repetitive. Also the sound of the main lead melody-thingy is not too impressive. But then again, the other instrument in the background sounds quite good. Drums are allright, after all it's drum and bass. The bass could perhaps be a little louder or more aggressive, and also somewhat less repetitive.

Structurally the piece is okay, except for the break at 1.30 which comes kind of too suddenly.

I must admit that I don't really understand drum and bass, and much less the word 'liquid' in front of it, so this is really just my opinion. Basically I think you should tweak the sounds a little and play around with the melody a little more. But it's definitely a good start.

By the way, with which program(s) did you make this?

EDIT: I just saw the other, I suppose newer version where you had added some sections. I think that way it's a lot better already. =)
« Last Edit: February 06, 2010, 07:47:22 pm by Sakmongkol »
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Re: Cizzle's Music
« Reply #13 on: February 06, 2010, 08:20:47 pm »
I like it, nice beat and good chord/string/pad or w/e you call it on the background.
I only think that the piano melodie sucks, the be honest even I can make better melodies ;D and i got the same question as Sakmongkol: what program u use? Fruityloopsstudio?
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Re: Cizzle's Music
« Reply #14 on: February 07, 2010, 05:15:01 pm »
yep, FL.
I'm just testing out new stuff, and because of that soundcloud nick was too random :D i changed it... anyway now , a new update on a diffrent project i'm just trying..

http://soundcloud.com/cizdnb/ciz-ascaris

I wonder where the name came from ;)
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Re: Cizzle's Music
« Reply #15 on: February 07, 2010, 06:03:10 pm »
Bah, it needs flash -_-'
And I that thought it sounded interesting with all these comments.
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Re: Cizzle's Music
« Reply #16 on: February 07, 2010, 07:28:56 pm »
well unlike you, I got very much melodies, but I cant really make a good song from it :(

in 1 fl-studiofile i already got like 30 melodies ;)

and I like the first song more than the second
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Re: Cizzle's Music
« Reply #17 on: February 10, 2010, 08:02:22 pm »
http://soundcloud.com/cizdnb/bitz ( work in progress )

While working on those previous ones, i'm also constantly working on something new :P
SO.. This is something much darker
Much harder..
much more difficult for the weak minded to handle ;)
 peace.
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Re: Cizzle's Music
« Reply #18 on: February 28, 2010, 10:35:19 pm »
http://soundcloud.com/cizdnb/cizz-last-breath

Some progressive house like thing.
« Last Edit: March 01, 2010, 12:54:55 am by Cizin »
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Re: Cizzle's Music
« Reply #19 on: February 28, 2010, 11:44:39 pm »
I think you should work on the fading at 1:40 a little bit more.
Try to make the fading a lot more smooth.

Other than that, nice track.
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