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Author Topic: [Level] Bakter's Duel v1  (Read 5192 times)

BakTer

[Level] Bakter's Duel v1
« on: January 25, 2009, 01:15:13 pm »
ok picks first:


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-------------------after few changes:



give it a try and comment ;)
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« Last Edit: February 09, 2009, 04:51:59 pm by BakTer »
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Sebbe

Re: [Level] Bakter's Duel v1
« Reply #1 on: January 25, 2009, 01:52:56 pm »
Hmm, where should I start?

Oh yeah. First of all, this reminds me of a typhical level I made (which was my first). It was like playing in a skin, as for me, it was the ninjanaro skin. Compared to yours, I didn't use any background or anything, both behind the dirt and outside of the ''skinlevel''. As I can see, this is your first level, right?

There is actually nothing wrong with doing those levels, but mixing those up with an unfitting background with total different graphics makes it looks bad. People might not download this, as it looks like it does. Oh, and another thing. While making a level, a special theme is needed. The only exception would be Complex, but most leves got their respectively theme. Your level got like < 3 themes mixed up into one level.

Something with the level. You've messed up the resizing of the pixles, which makes some pixles look bigger or smaller than the normal pixle. This leads the scale of the level completely bad (I can say, I did this problem to my first skinlevel). You could as well use some other colour of the dirt inside the ninja, to make some differences where you can dig or not.

I think this level looks like being mediocre, but it might be nice, for some people's views. But you should be aware of that most of the content you've used are stealed stuff, which you haven't made on your own. Without any disclaimers or permissions, you will get bombed by users who blames you for steaing other's stuff.

Overall, I think you should practise on making levels. Try to scetch up a good level on paper (if needed), think of a special theme and use some proper design and layout programs, to succeed with good graphics. I can rate this level being quite bad after all.

Don't take this as a flame, it's supposed to help you. :)
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Michiel

Re: [Level] Bakter's Duel v1
« Reply #2 on: January 25, 2009, 01:54:27 pm »
It looks a bit easy too make but I just played it in your server and it is a great map to play!
Hope the next version will be better;)
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BakTer

Re: [Level] Bakter's Duel v1
« Reply #3 on: January 25, 2009, 03:18:55 pm »
....

yeah i thought to do the skin pixels a bit "curvier" but then again... why not to be cubes like pixels are?

and yea.. the backround and items are ripped off, but ive made minor changes to fit them, and if im not wrong, you can use images whidout copyright in use of your self, and if you change it, then its same as yours? ah what the heck who cares? :D

btw added 1 new pic.
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miri

Re: [Level] Bakter's Duel v1
« Reply #4 on: January 25, 2009, 03:37:00 pm »
There is an Estonian flag in the minimap?

I won't bother commenting your level, Krystal said most of the things. It sucks.

Read the level making guide, it will help you.
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Re: [Level] Bakter's Duel v1
« Reply #5 on: January 25, 2009, 03:52:03 pm »
c'mon guys, it's not so bad ;) It's his first map, don't forget that.
I like the idea with the brain :) he's creative, so maybe he'll make some great maps in the future.
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Re: [Level] Bakter's Duel v1
« Reply #6 on: January 25, 2009, 04:18:05 pm »
:O ur from estonia?
level doesn't look too good nor too bad
but yah,first level...
i think i might make a level too soon -.-
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Sebbe

Re: [Level] Bakter's Duel v1
« Reply #7 on: January 25, 2009, 04:20:05 pm »
....
yeah i thought to do the skin pixels a bit "curvier" but then again... why not to be cubes like pixels are?

I maybe didn't express myself good enough but...

one pixle is mostly a square, which means every side has the same length. In your level, some ''pixles'' doesn't have the same length on the heigth nor the width, which makes the pixle a rectangle. Every square should have the same area.

Let's take this for instance:


Green: As comparing this to other squares, as this one looks quite good.
Blue: This one looks really broad, compared to the green circled one. It seems like it's higher than the green one as well.
Red: This one is too high, and it's really thin compared to the other squares.


Do you get it?


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BakTer

Re: [Level] Bakter's Duel v1
« Reply #8 on: January 25, 2009, 04:41:58 pm »
i did.

in fack i havent changed the model of ninja. i just made it bigger. so all pixels that made dif size cubes are now "a bit" larger you marked the sword or smthing.. i didnt change the sizes  it was like that.   :-\ or wasnt it

im not meaning that those are big pixels... im saying that 1pxel is 1x1.. if i enlarge by 10then 1 cube is 10x1 pizxles.. if the cube is 1x2px then it would be 10x20pxl something like that
« Last Edit: January 25, 2009, 04:57:39 pm by BakTer »
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Frey

Re: [Level] Bakter's Duel v1
« Reply #9 on: January 25, 2009, 06:48:20 pm »
There is an Estonian flag in the minimap?

I won't bother commenting your level, Krystal said most of the things. It sucks.

Read the level making guide, it will help you.
seriously, your comments suck. Try playing the level first, I played it and it's nice. There were a few down sides, but I reported those and BakTer seems to have fixed them.
Good job, certainly for it being your first level!
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Ahmed

Re: [Level] Bakter's Duel v1
« Reply #10 on: January 25, 2009, 08:45:53 pm »
Hi BakTer, cool level. Come play some games with [AoG] sometime :).
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Hugglebunny

Re: [Level] Bakter's Duel v1
« Reply #11 on: January 25, 2009, 09:56:10 pm »
The level look like the work krystal did with his skin some time ago, but the background is pretty nice ^^
It is good for your first level, but i simply dont like levels made off a skin.
It could be many persons who does. Continue with making levels, you could make a good level some day ** I have not tested level yet, but i will soon
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Hatten

Re: [Level] Bakter's Duel v1
« Reply #12 on: January 25, 2009, 10:15:21 pm »
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BakTer

Re: [Level] Bakter's Duel v1
« Reply #13 on: January 26, 2009, 02:50:26 pm »
The background reminds me too much of windows. I will not download it ;)

that backround is not made from windows :D i thought to make windows teletubbies backround, but then i just choosed pure grass and sky field :D
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Hugglebunny

Re: [Level] Bakter's Duel v1
« Reply #14 on: January 26, 2009, 03:22:42 pm »
The background reminds me too much of windows. I will not download it ;)

that backround is not made from windows :D i thought to make windows teletubbies backround, but then i just choosed pure grass and sky field :D
Woho! GO THE TELETUBBIE MAN!!
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BakTer

Re: [Level] Bakter's Duel v1
« Reply #15 on: January 27, 2009, 12:31:13 pm »
The background reminds me too much of windows. I will not download it ;)

that backround is not made from windows :D i thought to make windows teletubbies backround, but then i just choosed pure grass and sky field :D
Woho! GO THE TELETUBBIE MAN!!

And by that you mean?
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Hugglebunny

Re: [Level] Bakter's Duel v1
« Reply #16 on: January 27, 2009, 02:38:17 pm »
The background reminds me too much of windows. I will not download it ;)

that backround is not made from windows :D i thought to make windows teletubbies backround, but then i just choosed pure grass and sky field :D
Woho! GO THE TELETUBBIE MAN!!

And by that you mean?
Well if you know where to get teletubbies background you would also know about teletubbies!
AND FOR THAT YOU ARE THE TELETUBBIE MAN!!
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BakTer

Re: [Level] Bakter's Duel v1
« Reply #17 on: February 09, 2009, 04:50:54 pm »
added to database  :)

(i dint want to make this post, but i didnt foun the delete button, and i pressed qoute instead of modify at 1st post)
« Last Edit: February 09, 2009, 04:53:21 pm by BakTer »
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Jeff

Re: [Level] Bakter's Duel v1
« Reply #18 on: February 09, 2009, 10:07:09 pm »
I can't wait for the Microsoft Royale Developers to sue you

Edit: It's too lame, they probably wont care nm.
« Last Edit: February 09, 2009, 10:08:56 pm by Smexy Ligar »
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Griffin

Re: [Level] Bakter's Duel v1
« Reply #19 on: February 09, 2009, 10:09:21 pm »
I can't wait for the Microsoft Royale Developers to sue you
.. Do you ever stop posting crap? Seriously? Just stop and think before hitting the post button..
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BakTer

Re: [Level] Bakter's Duel v1
« Reply #20 on: February 09, 2009, 10:25:39 pm »
I can't wait for the Microsoft Royale Developers to sue you

Edit: It's too lame, they probably wont care nm.

ITS NOT THE WINDOWS BACKROUND PICTURE FFS

this is: http://www.guidebookgallery.org/pics/gui/desktop/empty/winxppro.png
« Last Edit: February 09, 2009, 10:29:08 pm by BakTer »
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Michiel

Re: [Level] Bakter's Duel v1
« Reply #21 on: February 09, 2009, 10:32:23 pm »
Its almost the same, A little bit different landscape.
oh, and BakTer's map hasnt got a trashbin in it.

-End of disscussion of the background
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