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Author Topic: Rubbish  (Read 33761 times)

GoldNinja

Rubbish
« on: May 08, 2008, 12:13:27 pm »
Okay, I know that almost every1 here is better than me, but I still wanna put these here. And I want constructive critisism too.

http://i25.tinypic.com/smyqhe.png
Here's a StickNinja. It's made with MS Paint and then modified with paint.net

http://i26.tinypic.com/2l8wzrl.jpg
Here's my dad's drawing. Wanted to show that too though I didn't made it :D
Made with pencil.

http://i30.tinypic.com/etyyc5.jpg
Here's my sketching of a car. xD
Made with pencil.

I have plenty more, but I dun wanna shove them up in ur faces simultaneously.. ^^
Pls, tell me what u think. Even if u dun like them, tell me!

« Last Edit: March 24, 2009, 09:48:18 am by GoldNinja »
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Ruki

Re: My art / rubbish xD
« Reply #1 on: May 08, 2008, 01:00:32 pm »
Ninja looks good, it could be a comic book character with slight changes. When you take a closer look you see its legs are not in a symmetry. Length of arms and legs - right arm and right leg are shorter than those on left. Next thing is shading. I don't know where the light source would be. Sword is too bright and not smooth enough compared to the ninja, making it more visible to the eyes than it should be. Last thing - background. It would be much better if you set your ninja in some place, not empty Space-time continuum.

Your dad's drawing is nice. Like every other tattoo of this kind is.

And final drawing - your car. The perspective is wrong. If you change lines to vectors and curves, they do not fit well into 3D coordinate system. It also looks like a flat tire there.

Do not expect much of a constructive criticism on those boards anyway.
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GoldNinja

Re: My art / rubbish xD
« Reply #2 on: May 08, 2008, 01:07:17 pm »
Do not expect much of a constructive criticism on those boards anyway.

Urs was pretty constuctive at least O.O Thank you veeeery much ^^ The next time I draw a StickNinja, or car I know excatly what to do and not to do xD
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DreaM

Re: My art / rubbish xD
« Reply #3 on: July 05, 2008, 06:51:18 pm »
hahahaha rubbish ;DD
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GoldNinja

Re: My art / rubbish xD
« Reply #4 on: July 05, 2008, 07:28:21 pm »
hahahaha rubbish ;DD

Hihii, it is rubbish :D And I almost forgot this topic, I thank you for bringing it up ;)
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GoldNinja

Re: My art / rubbish xD
« Reply #5 on: July 05, 2008, 07:36:36 pm »
I usually draw animals like dogs, so here's some of my animal pics ^^

http://i4.tinypic.com/87b5vsl.jpg
Doggie with wings. I know that the position aint very realistic.

http://i32.tinypic.com/209q52u.jpg
Dog who's just streching it's back leg a bit.

http://i14.tinypic.com/4lxxjqc.jpg
Here's a shark. It's fins arent supposed to line up like that, but I couldnt draw them any other way.

http://i26.tinypic.com/2zxmeqa.jpg
Here's other version from that shark above. Made with Paint.net, I think..


« Last Edit: July 20, 2008, 06:05:52 pm by GoldNinja »
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Griffin

Re: My art / rubbish xD
« Reply #6 on: July 05, 2008, 07:44:11 pm »
I like the shark, in fact I like it lots.
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GoldNinja

Re: My art / rubbish xD
« Reply #7 on: July 05, 2008, 08:04:10 pm »
Yay, thanks Griffin :D I dont wanna sound arrogant or anything, but I like it too!
Anyways, thank you very much ^^
« Last Edit: July 23, 2008, 04:11:09 pm by GoldNinja »
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GoldNinja

Re: My art / rubbish xD
« Reply #8 on: July 17, 2008, 04:40:51 pm »
Thihii, here's more of my art. These are kinda like wallpapers etc. All of these are made with paint & paint.net combined ^^

http://i34.tinypic.com/30jo7rm.png
Bunny banner. Yup, I am currently using this banner :D

http://i37.tinypic.com/osg1p3.jpg
Kakashi Hatake. I know, his face doesnt look like him :P And his eye irritates me, but
I was too lazy to do anything about it.

http://i33.tinypic.com/6idtet.jpg
Hell's Hound. I hope that the text above can be seen clearly :S

http://i28.tinypic.com/296db21.gif
Wallpaper. Here's the first version of this. It didnt have a purpose, so I dun
exactly like this.

http://i32.tinypic.com/2nlsmsg.png
Wallpaper2. Well this aint much better :P I just added some of my old characters I've drawn.
They dun rly fit into the backround, but there's nothing I can do about it anymore x/

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Deya

Re: My art / rubbish xD
« Reply #9 on: July 17, 2008, 04:59:43 pm »
hihii nice  ;)
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GoldNinja

Re: My art / rubbish xD
« Reply #10 on: July 17, 2008, 05:54:44 pm »
hihii nice  ;)

Constructive critisism would be nice :P But I'm glad that u liked these ^^
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MissingNo.

Re: My art / rubbish xD
« Reply #11 on: July 20, 2008, 08:59:17 am »
Very noice work. :)

GoldNinja

Re: My art / rubbish xD
« Reply #12 on: July 20, 2008, 02:07:50 pm »
Yesh, thaaaank youu! :D Well, at least I hope that "noice work" counts as a positive compliment x)
Still, thank you ^^
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miri

Re: My art / rubbish xD
« Reply #13 on: July 20, 2008, 02:34:21 pm »
I like Kakashi and Hell Hound. Wallpapers are crap.
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GoldNinja

Re: My art / rubbish xD
« Reply #14 on: July 20, 2008, 04:16:04 pm »
I like Kakashi and Hell Hound. Wallpapers are crap.

Exactly my thoughts ^^ Thank you!
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Re: My art / rubbish xD
« Reply #15 on: July 20, 2008, 04:32:00 pm »
nice drawings eh
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GoldNinja

Re: My art / rubbish xD
« Reply #16 on: July 20, 2008, 04:38:38 pm »
Dont ppl know how to criticize? xS But thank you ili :P
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Re: My art / rubbish xD
« Reply #17 on: July 20, 2008, 04:47:11 pm »
You better don't ask for critique here, or I will give you one.
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GriM

Re: My art / rubbish xD
« Reply #18 on: July 20, 2008, 04:50:18 pm »
From the top to bottom links :P

1. The dog gryphon- Great drawing, could use some detail and lighting effect for the wings.
2. The Dog- A Fantastic drawing, the pose is great and absolutely nothing wrong with it.
3. Hand drawn Shark- A good drawing, possibly my fave out of the hand drawn ones.
4. Shark with colour- Great colouring! absolutely awsome, good effects and nice choice of colour.
5. The Banner- Haha a funny banner and love the, a bit plain, but very original.
6. Kakashi- This is a great picture, although im not fully familiar with Naruto, shouldn't his left eye be full covered as if it was liek a / shape? but still a good pic.
7. Hell hound- The best pic you have done yet, love the saying but the dog has lack of detail, but i personally love it!
8. Blood wallpaper- Not the greatest of your work, but it has it's ideals, a fine choice of words.
9. Blood wallpaper 2- Same pic? ;o

Enjoy my comment :P
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GoldNinja

Re: My art / rubbish xD
« Reply #19 on: July 20, 2008, 04:56:02 pm »
You better don't ask for critique here, or I will give you one.
That's exactly what I am asking ;) Bring it on, I can take it :P

From the top to bottom links :P

1. The dog gryphon- Great drawing, could use some detail and lighting effect for the wings.
2. The Dog- A Fantastic drawing, the pose is great and absolutely nothing wrong with it.
3. Hand drawn Shark- A good drawing, possibly my fave out of the hand drawn ones.
4. Shark with colour- Great colouring! absolutely awsome, good effects and nice choice of colour.
5. The Banner- Haha a funny banner and love the, a bit plain, but very original.
6. Kakashi- This is a great picture, although im not fully familiar with Naruto, shouldn't his left eye be full covered as if it was liek a / shape? but still a good pic.
7. Hell hound- The best pic you have done yet, love the saying but the dog has lack of detail, but i personally love it!
8. Blood wallpaper- Not the greatest of your work, but it has it's ideals, a fine choice of words.
9. Blood wallpaper 2- Same pic? ;o

Enjoy my comment :P

I did enjoy ur comment ^^ I must say that ur way better at critisism than me x) THIS IS WHAT I CALL CRITISISM PPL! Oh and the wallpaper 2 is the same pic, but I added couple of my characters I've drawn. Appearently they didnt show very well xS
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